This was really charming and sweet! I loved the cutout aesthetic of the character designs, and I though the two protags’ voices would get annoying but the voice acting was on point for everyone! I also think the simple story was executed very well; it was well paced and well structured. The lip syncing was also done very well!

Overall this was a very nice watch; great work!

The way the Lo-Fight leitmotif snuck in so melancholically took me super off guard! The character interactions were super believable, the art worked incredibly well, and the pacing was great. Well done!

I like it a lot! Stylistically it's very striking; the character designs are all really nice. The aesthetic felt very cohesive and the characters' expressions and movements were incredibly dynamic.

The humor and tone really hit well and fit the style you were going for! The overly dramatic voice acting also worked incredibly here; it really helped to sell the world. Additionally the concept is really solid and has a lot of potential to expand; a supervillian school setting can go a lot of places both comedically and narratively, so that was a great choice of setting. Finally I really liked the protagonist; Spike was annoying in the best way possible, so great job on making him endearing!

In terms of things I wasn't too keen on, the animation was hit or miss; a great deal of it was very fluid and expressive but a bit was rough around the edges and could've used some cleanup and/or reworking. Additionally, a few pacing and dialogue/animation syncing issues held the short back a bit. (To your credit though, the pacing does improve as the toon goes on!)

Overall this was really nice, especially for your first toon! Great freakin' job!!!

Didn't finish the game but I did enjoy what I played! The art and music were a highlight, and the gameplay was fairly easy to understand. I think a way to get more origamis should be implemented, and I found it a bit too easy to get stuck on ladders while coming off of them. This was a very solid package overall, despite the few hiccups I encountered!

Both of TappyWara's drawings feel specifically catered to me lol; I love angular art styles and Gildedguy & BF are two of my favorite characters right now, and Tappy did an excellent job translating them into that angular style.

Everyone else did great as well! I loved the mix of styles, and although I do wish there were more pics and that they were in a random order, this was a great April Fools Day joke.

Funny but only kept my attention for a few seconds. The idea of killing FNF fans in the NG office is really novel but the hurtboxes on said FNF fans feels unfair. I do like the sprites however and I think the controls feel really nice, but ultimately it's just a high score chaser that ends in under a minute once you get FNF fan jumpscared. I think the game accomplishes what it sets out to do, but it feels like there could be something more.

Congrats on your first original song with lyrics!! That’s a huge milestone. Super catchy chorus too; those low “and”s are a great contrast.

Maaaaan having a gf will INSPIRE the mess out of some music in you. It’s like nothing else in the world. You’ll get there one day bro!!

You absolutely killed this mix!!! The guitar and the opening sfx were my favorite aspects.

When the github page leaked the artist names, I shouted “TERAVEX?!?” when I saw it and I think you absolutely delivered. I hope they bring you back for more :D

(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)

Composition: 10.5

Mixing: 10

13/8 implementation: 10.5

Other thoughts: I think the composition could've benefitted from being a little longer and more varied, and the bass could've been a bit deeper to stand out more. Additionally, I would've liked the 13/8 to be more than just 12/8 with a pause at the end. There's a great idea in here, but it definitely needed more TLC to emerge.

Average score: 10.3

Thank you for joining the competition!

Love the composition and shading, and absolutely a message I needed to hear today. Thank you for this piece

That TV head guy is especially good; I like the pose and proportions!! You’ve improved your art a TON; really good work :)

Really sick interpretation! Love the pickaxe and expression

(I actually once PM’d Tom about Tankman in Fortnite a few years ago; I believe he said he’d be down if Epic was down!)