There's a few good ideas here; the little chime flourishes, for example, were well timed and added a bit of flair to the piece.
However, I think overall the song felt empty and unstructured. A few notes felt out of place and didn't really match up with the key of the song. Additionally, while I see the idea here, it doesn't really feel like the song has any specific identity or direction.
Keep practicing; you'll get better with time! It's awesome that you're practicing music and trying something new. Keep going!!