This was a nice piece! You did a pretty good job keeping things varied and interesting for the song's runtime. Doing everything in one FL pattern is crazy work LOL
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This was a nice piece! You did a pretty good job keeping things varied and interesting for the song's runtime. Doing everything in one FL pattern is crazy work LOL
Thanks for joining the collab :D
Thank you!
Really enjoyed this one conceptually. Wish I would’ve joined!
(shletty getting a LOT of mileage out of that one piano loop LOL)
lolll fr
Really enjoy the groove of this one but think the low end should be a bit deeper. Felt a bit too tinny. Still really love the summery vibe of it; if I may, it reminds me of some early instrumental Kawai Sprite or nelward stuff. Really nice :)
EDIT: Updated from 3.5 stars to 4.5 stars. That extra bit of bass adds a LOT of needed character!
Oh no! I'm so sorry to hear that, I'll try to get home as soon as possible and fix the mixing and as soon as I can!
This is a phenomenal start to the album (other than "Behold!"). Sets the mood perfectly! Thank you for teaching me what a "kakistocracy" is.
Thank You For Your Kind Words!
maxx you mogged me LOL
lolll
(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)
Composition: 10.5
Mixing: 10
13/8 implementation: 10.5
Other thoughts: I think the composition could've benefitted from being a little longer and more varied, and the bass could've been a bit deeper to stand out more. Additionally, I would've liked the 13/8 to be more than just 12/8 with a pause at the end. There's a great idea in here, but it definitely needed more TLC to emerge.
Average score: 10.3
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Yeah, this ain’t a good song, but I love how your making everything on a 13/8
But yeah, if you want actually decent crap, check literally anything above this track on my account. Thanks for the feed back! :D
(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)
Composition: 11.5
Mixing: 12
13/8 implementation: 12
Other thoughts: For what it's worth, the drop made me say aloud "Wait this is kinda nasty!" LOL. Really enjoyed the approach of tackling 13/8 as two fours and a five, and the key change was another great track. I think the repetitive melody used works great, but some variation would've been awesome and the ending should've been less abrupt. Additionally, while the mix was a little harsh, given the genre tropes you're working with I think it fits well in-context.
Average score: 11.8
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thanks!
(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)
Composition: 12
Mixing: 12
13/8 implementation: 12.5
Other thoughts: I scored 13/8 implementation at 12.5 because of the multitude of ways you approached the groove throughout the piece. I honestly don't have much to say other than I enjoyed this one a lot! Solid progression, solid mixing, solid usage of the time sig - just a solid track all around. Nicely done!
Average score: 12.2
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Thanks for the review and the chance to try out the 13/8 time sig's!
(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)
Composition: 12.5
Mixing: 10.5
13/8 implementation: 12
Other thoughts: LOVED the composition. Wild, crazy, unpredictable, off-kilter - very very fun to listen all the way through, most importantly. The main thing that's holding the composition back is the mixing - some parts of the track hurt my ears a little bit! The mix was clear, but far too loud in some areas. Other than that, though, I thoroughly enjoyed the ride. (Also the "HAND" title reference made me smile, and the YouTube visualizer was a great touch!)
Average score: 11.7
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thank you for your review! i definitely feel like i should have done some limiting on the RMS in retrospect; i'll probably do that for a future release ;)
(Please note that instead of being scored on a 0-5 point scale, tracks are judged on an 8-13 point scale, with 8 being the lowest score and 13 being the highest.)
Composition: 12
Mixing: 11.5
13/8 implementation: 11.5
Other thoughts: Loved the composition, and I loved how driving it was - although I do wish there was a little more variety to it. I also thought the synths that come in around the 0:39 mark and 1:04 mark could have been a little quieter. Overall though I think you have a great track! I loved the juxtaposition of the intro and outro as well.
Average score: 11.7
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thank you for hosting!
Howdy and hello, folks; my name is Christian Sasser, but you can call me MH4. I'm a Christian, a hobbyist music / video producer, and a third thing. If you’d like to collab on a project, feel free to ask!
Age 22, Male
Like 3 jobs lol
College Graduate
Louisiana, USA
Joined on 4/9/21